Look Book evaluation

I decided to do an R2-D2 design mixed with a superhero cape. This was for my t-shirt and was a spoof t-shirt. I originally thought I should do a DJ Stormtrooper, but decided that drawing a Stormtrooper in the pose I wanted would be too difficult, so I did R2-D2 instead which I'm very pleased with the design, but I could've spent more time perfecting the cape and I could've put text around the logo to establish the brand. For the look book, I photoshopped a Yoda head and lightsaber onto an actor's body to establish the Star Wars brand and the cult interest. For the look book I could've incorporated more pages with images and text on them. I think that there are too many blank pages with no text. I could also improve the amount of pictures I incorporated into it. I did take more than I needed, but it would all be too similar, so a better variety of images would have given me more to work with.