Presentation feedback
when i presented my idea in the presentation , the majority of the feedback was that my idea was to ambitious . It included three scene styles, which were shadow puppets , prospective and noir with a runner as the centre of the story .
The puppets would have been too time consuming to make . And i do not have experience in making puppets so would have to experiment .
The feedback on the noir scene was that it did not fit with the story , too jarring .
The main point was that i was trying to include too much in my short film .
The one with best potential would be the prospective scene as it would fit with the story idea .
I feel that doing three different scenes with various styles would mean that i would not be able to focus on getting my film as polished as i could , possible spreading myself too thin .
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